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gaasaku chapter 1 by ~saku-hearts-sasu:iconsaku-hearts-sasu:





Gaara was a very lonely child; when he was born the village put a sand demon in him. Everyone was afraid and hated little Gaara even his dad who tried to kill him many times. He didn’t have any really friends because most of the kids were afraid of him.
On one day that all changed. It was typical day in the dessert very hot during the day but I guess people were used to that. Gaara was doing what he normally did, swung on the swings and watched the other kids play. He noticed they were playing with a ball and they kicked it so high it landed on the roof. The kids couldn’t reach it when all of a sudden the ball mysteriously floated down to them. The children were shocked and Gaara stood and said, “Can I please play.” All the kids got really scared and ran away Gaara yelled after them to stop but they kept going. He felt hurt and confused because he didn’t know why people were treating him like this it made him feel so lonely. He fell to his knees and started to cry, “Why does everyone hate me so much.” As he continued to cry he heard a loud noise from a nearby ally. As Gaara walked over and said, “Who is it?”
©2008-2010 ~saku-hearts-sasu
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this is my very first story hope you like it by the way it is sort of a recap of gaara's life but if you like it will be different...

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:iconstephokere:
good start.. plzz continue ><!

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Sebastian<3
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:iconsaku-hearts-sasu:
really you think i should i will try thanks
:iconstephokere:
yupp:)
np ^ ^

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Sebastian<3
~For am one hell of a sexy butler~


~take a peek at mii gallery :) [link]
:iconbigpac09:
nicely done man the pic is cute to she is right next time space it out :) i made the same mistake when i wrote my first fanfic -.- it was bad lol anyways nicly done

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We stare at broken clocks, the hands don't turn anymore
The days turn into nights, empty hearts and empty places
The day you lost him, I slowly lost you too
For when he died, he took a part of you
BRING ME TO HORIZON
:iconoverlordofnobodies:
Hey not to bad of a start. I have to keep a eye of this.
:iconsaku-hearts-sasu:
lol thanks i am still thinking of a second one but am not sure
:iconsaku-hearts-sasu:
by the way queenofcats81 helped me with the picture and a very good pic it is credit goes to here 2
:iconm-richelieu:
I made a few typos too ^^

Sorry about that.

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Merrique "Blue 88" Richelieu

This is between me, you, and the holy grapefruit.

Those who would trade freedom and justice for saftey deserve neither freedom nor safety.
:iconsaku-hearts-sasu:
thanks i know bout the spacing and i thought it need a bit more detail in it but i really appreciate your help with it should i try a second chapter and ask you to check it for me lol before anything else
:iconm-richelieu:
I hope it didn't bother you.

Well, try to upload to the fanart gallery, that way, I can see it when you post. ^^

Oh, you can send it via note, too.

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Merrique "Blue 88" Richelieu

This is between me, you, and the holy grapefruit.

Those who would trade freedom and justice for saftey deserve neither freedom nor safety.

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